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PlaskettForest
10-17-2010, 09:39 AM
This is my Seussian short dark comedy that won the CAmm Slamm 2010 48-hour film project competition in Baltimore, Maryland, 10/10/10. Hope you enjoy it. Feedback is welcomed!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vys3v_cyf1U&hd=1

gooberman
10-17-2010, 01:22 PM
Reminded me of dr.suess. It was good.

PlaskettForest
10-17-2010, 01:56 PM
Reminded me of dr.suess. It was good.


Yes, Dr. Seuss was part of the inspiration. The original script I wrote did not rhyme at all, bu this idea just hit me and I was much more pleased with it after I added the rhyme.

Thanks!

gooberman
10-17-2010, 02:46 PM
her shcool project at the end looked like a screenplay.

Buddy Greenfield
10-17-2010, 03:08 PM
Sweet and demented. (I enjoyed it.)

-Thanks-

PlaskettForest
10-17-2010, 04:29 PM
Sweet and demented. (I enjoyed it.)

-Thanks-

Appreciate it. Thanks.

PlaskettForest
10-17-2010, 04:30 PM
her shcool project at the end looked like a screenplay.

I'll never tell. :)

Murdock
10-18-2010, 07:25 PM
The dialogue needs to be more sing-songy if you're going to use a lymrical rhyme style. Pretty cool.