watch In the studio promo video

heres a little in studio video i shot for my buddy who is currently recording his album in the studio in our basement...the backround music is one of his tracks stripped of the vocals. I haven't shot anything even close to a documentary before (more of a narrative guy) also i shot the whole thing in about 30 minutes with an hour of editing...no color grading or anything like that... simple, straight forward, in the studio promo video.
critical comments TOTALLY welcomed...
http://vimeo.com/14691993

We don't know anything new from the vid. Who is that guy? What's he doing? We should know from the vid, not your description. Here's a link to a in-studio vid. See how they intro everything.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nkeBG0nh84