View Full Version : Sixty Seconds of Action - Short Action Movie


PaulGriffith
07-18-2010, 10:03 AM
Hey everyone, new here. I wanted to share a short we made a few weeks ago. It's a short action sequence, more of an effects/equipment test but it's fun to watch :)

We shot it in an afternoon with a Canon 7D, 50mm f/1.4 lens, and a few friends and various other equipment. Spent about 40 hours in post working on the effects though!

Let me know how you like it! Criticism is more than welcome, we're always looking to improve, We're in post on the next project so we'll take it all to heart. Thanks!

YouTube Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5APm86UxUM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5APm86UxUM

Papertwinproductions
07-18-2010, 10:22 AM
It's a nice technique, you've worked it better than any I've seen so far. The lighting was a little strong at points, but it's forgivable.

My only real critique would lay with the lack of recoil, but be this more of test-shoot material, I'll believe you'd have looked further into your product had it been a full-scale project.

Nice work guys.

Pedro Monteiro
07-18-2010, 11:25 AM
Movement is impeccable, the slow motion and sound is perfect. Loved it.

PaulGriffith
07-20-2010, 08:48 AM
Thanks for the input!

CDCosta
07-20-2010, 10:14 AM
Slow Motion with sound fx was nicely done. Was a little over exposed. Very well done for a test shot.

gooberman
07-20-2010, 10:43 AM
nice work. did you make your own muzzle flash or did you use something like digital juce or Action Essentials 2?

GRhenals
07-20-2010, 12:44 PM
Nice little piece.

The sound and visual effects of the guns are top-notch.

Cracker Funk
07-20-2010, 10:19 PM
That's pretty badass.

I'm not a fan of the AE blood-splatters. I don't think they look real, at all. Also, as Papertwin mentioned, how come these gunshots don't cause any recoil? You've got a dude shooting a pretty high-caliber gun, pointing it with a limp wrist, and it doesn't move. Anyway...

Dude, your camera movement, shot selection, editing, audio, and lots of other stuff -- top notch. Bravo!

PaulGriffith
07-21-2010, 12:55 PM
Thanks again for the input guys.

It is Video Copilot's action essentials, but if all you're needing from the kit is muzzle flashes it's way too easy to make you're own to justify it. I've been using a particle plug in a lot lately in After Effects than can actually generate most of everything in the kit, and I'm using it a lot more in the next short.

Haha, a lot of people comment on the recoil. On the shoot day we had the actors fake it and then shoot without a lot, it looked better solid. We figured that if a guy can shimmy on up and take out four others without flinching, he an probably hold a gun without kicking too much haha. We did talk to an infantry man, he surprisingly said the rifle looked ok, but the pistol would kick way more.

It's something to keep in mind for sure, working on recoil. It's hard to nail down well. Thanks again for all the input. This forum seems pretty helpful!

rockerrockstar
07-22-2010, 01:59 AM
It was great. I think you got it down pretty good. The action sequence was really cool how it was filmed. I think the film looks a little over bright maybe darken the brightness.