Do your worst.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBw9v_Pjk9A

It was a very neat short but i couldn't really see some of your shots. Work on your lighting. But other than that I thought your camera work was comendable and you should consider making another movie like this.

I think its great.

would you teach me some of your basics.

thanks.

good job... what camera are you using?