watch War Picture

Hey guys
Here are the war parts from an ANZAC day short film competition me and my mates made.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8oAErzOvLc

i couldnt find all the footage so there isnt as much of a story in this version right now.

what do you think ???

Here is another short film we made for a government film competition about New Zealand identity.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7o2WDcaYCvg

its a little cheesy in parts but it was still fun to make. it was a 10 hour climb going up and down that mountian

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JPxPA2sAf_0

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JfyNcn87gPI&feature=related

I didn't like the music in the beginning, I don't think there should have been music.

that rocket effect was just stupid looking. sorry it was

the grenades were....well looked like someone threw sacs of flour
watch the youtube vids I posted

not a big fan of the effect the dieing guy saw

around 145 the guy gets shot and pauses
then falls
people DROP when they are shot always

158 that guy would be dead

213 what kind of gun is that? thing looks weird as hell


in short it looks to fake to take seriously

but its way better than I could do or anyone I know could do

and of course you don't have a large budget
all that considered

damn good job man


edit
a bit more advice

If this is a war vet with a flashback
just don't show it. go wes craven and let peoples imagination do the work
I probubly would have imagined better than you could show with you're budget
it seems unnecesary

I will like to see how the effects look when you are done. Please post both side by side and label (with and without effects).

For the budget you folks did an okay job. I would remove Korean War from the title and go with something else. The clothing and weapons don't seem to fit the Korean War. Naming it something else might get the audience more into the film.

Good luck.