watch Comedy Short Films!

Hello all, I am a writer/director and one half of the comedy sketch group Laugh Taxi. This an adult content sketch group with an emphasis on comedy writing. Check em out if you have free time and ANY feedback is really appreciated. Thanks everyone.

"Inhaler"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bTNvhXXGTlc

"Shitbag USA"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TJgOLxY__yU&feature=channel

Watch the inhaler. It's predictable but funny. I like the fact that moves from one object to the other that quickly.

From the script there are some silly things that don't really work, like saying "who the f*** are you?". They are together at home, so it doesn't make sense.

Also check the lighting and color tones. There are parts where there is more blue than others for two angles of the same scene part.

Also the blood... check the internet on how to make cheap fake blood. I did one with syrup, food colourant and some flour. Easy to make and cheap. Also you can eat it, poor it in your mouth, and clean it after.

Some camera angles are nicely worked.

Keep it on. I have rated the video and commented it.

Hey thanks for the feedback backslash thats great stuff you said.