I'm working on my next movie, and I desperately don't want to make the same mistakes twice. But, if you don't know the first mistakes, then you're bound to repeat them.
I have noticed that half the people don't get the meanings from my individual scenes. I don't know if it's the way I shot it, or presented it. I do know I used very little exposition in my dialogue. This is true in my latest script. I did use a tremendous amount of tiny actions, that if a viewer thought for a moment should be able to draw a reasonable conclusion.
An example: Dad is getting a BJ from Mom and he's being pretty violent about it. He grabs Mom's head and violently pounds it till he spits in her mouth. Then he grabs her by her hair, pulls her up and gives a huge sloppy kiss. All this while 9-year-old Tim watches from another room.
The gist of this scene is the boy gets his first view and erection from watching this violent sexual act. But, if you think for a moment, Dad pulling mom up and shoving his tongue down her throat after blowing his load in there is not the norm for straight men. Later on we find out that Dad died of AIDS.
My movie is littered with little actions like this. Am I thinking too much about the little things? Do you folks think about or get little moments like this, either when making or watching movies?
I have noticed that half the people don't get the meanings from my individual scenes. I don't know if it's the way I shot it, or presented it. I do know I used very little exposition in my dialogue. This is true in my latest script. I did use a tremendous amount of tiny actions, that if a viewer thought for a moment should be able to draw a reasonable conclusion.
An example: Dad is getting a BJ from Mom and he's being pretty violent about it. He grabs Mom's head and violently pounds it till he spits in her mouth. Then he grabs her by her hair, pulls her up and gives a huge sloppy kiss. All this while 9-year-old Tim watches from another room.
The gist of this scene is the boy gets his first view and erection from watching this violent sexual act. But, if you think for a moment, Dad pulling mom up and shoving his tongue down her throat after blowing his load in there is not the norm for straight men. Later on we find out that Dad died of AIDS.
My movie is littered with little actions like this. Am I thinking too much about the little things? Do you folks think about or get little moments like this, either when making or watching movies?