watch My first time directing...

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Brooksy

• Jul 31, 2009

• #1

This is my first time directing and writing. Please leave me some constructive critiques if you would like. If you would like more details on the shoot or anything let me know. But it is pretty straight forward.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmAh...5680487868&mbox_pos=0&feature=player_embedded

 

Zensteve

• Jul 31, 2009

• #2

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Brooksy

• Jul 31, 2009

• #3

Sorry about that. It was taken down for some reason. But now we are back up.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fpbw...com/home.php?ref=home&feature=player_embedded

 

rogypro

• Aug 6, 2009

• #4

haha well not bad for a first time, the guy actually kept me listening. so it had a good dialougue... the acting of the workes was a bit weak at times, but other than that kinda cool, and a bit cliche..... idk.. haha

 

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Brooksy

• Aug 6, 2009

• #5

I would have to agree with you on all of that rogypro. My main character really did hold it all together. And the writing well... suffered. I will never claim to be a writer and I actually hate writing, but I felt that I needed to start somewhere and none of my writer friends were up to the challenge, so I tried it out myself. There are things I would have done differently but hind-sight is always 20-20. Thanks for the view.

 

knightly

• Aug 6, 2009

• #6

Funny. I love when he tries to sell the camera from the Doc crew! Brilliant. Keep it up I kept expecting the lady to buy something, she played that pretty well.