View Full Version : HD Neighborhood Short Documentary, PLEASE CRITIQUE!! Xh-a1


cring
07-20-2009, 11:41 AM
I tried to make this my best work yet, please let me know what you like or what I should change.

http://vimeo.com/5680555

or quicktime version...

www.cringfilms.com/MyersPark2

PEACE

a_sower
07-20-2009, 10:46 PM
Well, I was saying to myself before I realized you were promoting Myers Park, what a pretty place to live; so since it was a promo type piece, I thought you did a wonderful job. The only constructive criticism I have is the music toward the end... it got too loud and a little annoying. Oh yeah, in my opinion the lady being interviewed could have been in a little softer light, but it was still ok.

Nice job.

CDCosta
07-22-2009, 10:52 AM
I thought it was nice overall.

It got a little repetitive, but that's just the type of piece it was.

Methos
09-10-2009, 11:14 PM
I really liked it. For a promo piece, it kept my attention visually and the music really added to the mood and my attention span.

Very good job - in my opinion.