hello if you are a script writing pro, could i send you my first feature script that i am working on. its not finished but i need some advice on if it looks good thanks:D

i'm a pro. let me read it. whats it about, generally.

its a ex boxer telling his story to a young reporter, its no were near finished but its my first script and i want to know if im writing it good and laying it out correctly

ill take a look if you want drs_inc_harris@yahoo.com

Hey! I wouldn't call my self a pro, but I'm decent at feedback :) sheilainthemodernworld@gmail.com if you wants.

(Also, I don't know if you have already done this, but before you send a script around anonymously make sure you have some kind of copy write/established claim to it. With the internetz better safe than sorry :))