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- Thread starter GorehoundLarry
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Well, I don't have speakers on my computer at the moment, so no sound. But here's my opinion on the video:
I thought the actual filming was done pretty well. Lighting, angles, etc.
The scene transitions were pretty jerky. Try to figure out some better transitions. You faded out a few times, that looked a lot better to me than just boom! next scene.
The part where she called 911 was kinda messed up, I think you should have figured out a better way to film that whole part. It kind of appeared, then disappeared, than reappeared. I gathered she got sick afterward, so maybe you were going for that effect. I still think, though, that you could have done it better.
The last comment is not so much on filming but acting. If you have a choice of more than one or two people willing to go topless for a film, try to find someone who can take their pants off with a bit more style! lol, I know this is kind of a silly point, but I've watched some modeling-type shows (Battle of the Bods on Spike, I believe it was) and this was something the judges talked about, the inability of one of the female contestants to take her pants off quickly, while being smooth.
Note that I'm not a professional in any aspect of filmmaking, so this is only my slightly-educated opinion.
I thought the actual filming was done pretty well. Lighting, angles, etc.
The scene transitions were pretty jerky. Try to figure out some better transitions. You faded out a few times, that looked a lot better to me than just boom! next scene.
The part where she called 911 was kinda messed up, I think you should have figured out a better way to film that whole part. It kind of appeared, then disappeared, than reappeared. I gathered she got sick afterward, so maybe you were going for that effect. I still think, though, that you could have done it better.
The last comment is not so much on filming but acting. If you have a choice of more than one or two people willing to go topless for a film, try to find someone who can take their pants off with a bit more style! lol, I know this is kind of a silly point, but I've watched some modeling-type shows (Battle of the Bods on Spike, I believe it was) and this was something the judges talked about, the inability of one of the female contestants to take her pants off quickly, while being smooth.
Note that I'm not a professional in any aspect of filmmaking, so this is only my slightly-educated opinion.
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Not really my cup of tea but still, you've got a really willing actor who doesn't mind doing that kind of acting if you know what i'm saying. Like i said i find it a bit distasteful but then again thats me, some people like this kind of film and i'm sure it sparked controversy at your viewing so i admire you for doing that.
I thought this film was a little bit silly
I'm not sure if it was clear what her motivations were apart from wanting to be 'dirty'
There were a couple of shots that I felt were interesting; the shot down the hallyways of her legs in the bathroom being the most notable.
Not really sure why this film was made really. The idea of her masturbating with a cat was humorous for a moment or two, especially when I saw the cat, but I'm not sure if you wanted me to laugh or not
one more thing, I think the titles at the end should be consistent. I don't think the font should change
I'm not sure if it was clear what her motivations were apart from wanting to be 'dirty'
There were a couple of shots that I felt were interesting; the shot down the hallyways of her legs in the bathroom being the most notable.
Not really sure why this film was made really. The idea of her masturbating with a cat was humorous for a moment or two, especially when I saw the cat, but I'm not sure if you wanted me to laugh or not
one more thing, I think the titles at the end should be consistent. I don't think the font should change
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um pretty good concerning the fact that you actually
persuaded the girl to get naked...
That's pretty hard. Director actor trust all the way man.
But I don't think you got the message across...
It was too pornographic, so the distraction
was too much for the audience to pay attention to the actual
storyline and message of the story.
That's why pornos fail at storyline.
haha.
persuaded the girl to get naked...
That's pretty hard. Director actor trust all the way man.
But I don't think you got the message across...
It was too pornographic, so the distraction
was too much for the audience to pay attention to the actual
storyline and message of the story.
That's why pornos fail at storyline.
haha.
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