watch Indie Short Film - " The Motivated Entrepreneur "

Hi all,

Very excited to share this happiness as i just completed my very first short film titled "The Motivated Entrepreneur"
It was very tough to follow the whole production as it's all shot by a day time. Am very proud of this video...

Please have a look at my baby ... ;p
I will be much appreciated if you can give me some suggestion or comments to improve on. Thanks ya!

Part 1: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bbgjPqsxncc

Part 2: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=isgR60HkMuo

Part 3: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ORIVf6ppbdo

Part 4: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9g2KmKyODI

As newbie to short film, i'm really hoping to receive your comment.

I only had time to watch the first segement, but looks nice, well framed shots, good transitions, look forward to watching the rest.