Sup People!! New to this forum and I have some stuff to show!!
I worked as a CGI animator since 99. Worked on SIN City and 300. From that experience I moved to film making. Great because I build a good list of contact in the industry. And we all know contacts Is part of the key to success ;).. but still Fuc2342ing hard to get notice...
Here my first short film I did, RADICAL RIFLE ICON. It played at Fantasia film festival.
Vimeo HD
http://www.vimeo.com/3302283
My blog
Http://rambangbang.blogspot.com
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm313/sinisterburger/ninja.jpg
Enjoy
Ram
spankydoesfilm
04-14-2009, 09:27 PM
BULLET PROOF!!!
I liked it. Its a bit different than the films im used to seeing, but i think it works. It was very entertaining.
The only semi negative comment I have is that the lighting is a bit bright in some scenes and I think it pulls away from the story a little. Also i was looking for things like that, so to others it might be less noticeable.
Major Kudos for doing all of that work yourself also!!!
Overall I really liked it! Keep up the good work.
Thx Spanky for viewing!!
YEah I know the light was a PAinnnnnn!! I light it up with construction lights :( ... Something I will never do again, but I was limited in the budget. But now, I got some good lights and hope my next project:" Raymond May Have Rabies" will render properly.
About the Story.
The original script was a mess, basically I created a new story with the footage I had. Now I'm wayyyy more prepared in term of script writing ( 2 years of INTENSIVE study and research). So if got entertain, I can say my job is done! I'm very please with that comment :)
Cheer
Ram
http://rambangbang.blogspot.com
M1chae1
04-15-2009, 04:36 PM
I dig the style. I think technically it's very nice.
I also dig the look of the actors, and their costume. Good casting. I'm not a huge fan of the acting of the lead guy...but he ain't that bad, and he looks great.
I think the sound is good, other than--as you know--the warehouse location...obviously their voices are echoing, not what a jungle sounds like. Not sure if you can filter that or not...but it's pretty obvious.
I think the script was...so so. Wishy washy. But it worked for this surreal piece.
Really cool short. I loved the hell out of 300 and Sin City...and I can see the influence of those films on your project.
Good luck.
