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View Full Version : The Poke Show: Things Jose Would Never Say. Pink Guy 06-10-2007, 08:51 PM He's Jose and he would never say such things. "Things Jose Would Never Say." by The Non-Retards (http://www.thepokeshow.com/things-jose-would-never-say/poke-show-sketches/2007/06/10/) Written by: Nicklaus Louis and Jose Fuentes Performed by: Jose Fuentes John@Bophe 06-11-2007, 11:06 PM Pink -- great idea, and some funny lines, but the constant cut back to the title card (with music) got to be a bit much. It was a humor momentum killer. I would have enjoyed it more if you just connected the jokes together so that you don't give the viewer a chance to stop chuckling. Build on the laughter. Pink Guy 06-12-2007, 01:39 AM Thanks for the feedback. We have a ton of these things, and there will be follow-ups. So the feedback helps a lot. And speaking of that, anyone who has an opinion on these things we're doing, please don't hesitate to let me know -- I'm learning this as I go, and every comment helps. Thanks again, John. |
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